NUMA

holding light in my hand

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Author DaggaFork
Tags action author:daggafork experimental featured mellow playable rated relax
Created 2015-04-27
Last Modified 2015-05-26
Rating
5
by 7 people.
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Description ?i thought so, you know

This map was featured on 2015-06-27

holding light in my hand
carried for miles to end up here
beside the muddy road
under the wet gray sky.

holding light in my hand
but it slips through my fingers
inevitably.

my hands now empty
the yellow carnations shine
like sun through the shadows
beneath an unmarked grave.

script

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thanks everyone! i think this poem captures something pretty well, glad you all like my map :)

A promotion.

Alright, what the hell. Let's do this.

CONGRATS DAGGA!!!

Your mapping this last year 2015 was top notch! You deserved it. :D

27.200

I'm so bad on Nv1.4. I like this map so much. That make so much fun. Only the laser drone seems to ruin my fun very quickly. For me it is hard to avoid these drones, because he always comes in my way, and killed me. 4/5
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He's been promoted to Review Quality Inspector / Feature Queue Manager. I'm very busy at work and I don't have much time anymore.

PS I love the review.
reviews can either be about the map or just relevant quips for all we care

Hmmm.

Sounds weird, you should just send Aidiera a PM on the forums again, he might have just forgotten, but the fact that he edited the reviews seems to indicate that he thought they were alright aside from small issues.

Is it bad that i don't consider this a review? I'm not saying it's bad, but it's a poem, not a review. A review is rather like "this map is cool the rockets are well placed and the mines are a challenge to avoid this is a must play", not this sort of stuff.

Also, Aidiera was recently asking for new reviewers so i sent two sample reviews and then he edited them and changed like one word to say something else and then, in my perspective, nothing really happened. It may as well be my fault, but still.
Great map, very atmospheric.
lifdoff pretty much said everything concerning reviews. If you don't like it, change it.
if they're well written. this one is

Also.

Just to make that clear: you are free to dislike reviews all you want. It would be boring if everyone liked the same things.

I just get a little pissed when people tell us reviewers that we aren't doing our jobs correctly.
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Perfect. Message Aidiera with two sample reviews, he'd be happy to take you on, we need more reviewers any way.

And in the mean time, accept that different people do reviews differently and that it's up to the reviewer's discretion how he wants to do his job.

And what does a review like this have to do with the map?

Well, basically nothing. Except that it uses it's title.

Why can't reviewers actually REVIEW maps instead of doing stuff like this? In my opinion, it's not some cool alternative artistic thing or whatever. What it REALLY is, is not a review.

love this map a lot

AGD

very satisfying
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first playthrough

very relaxing. Until I died :(
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agd - 3:/
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