Almost Reborn
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| Author | Donfuy |
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| Tags | author:donfuy medium race rated |
| Created | 2008-08-08 |
| Last Modified | 2008-08-08 |
| Rating |
2 by 5 people.
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| Description | No. It isn't "a hell of a reborn!" like I pretended.
But even if you don't notice, I worked pretty hard to do this map. Enjoy, constructively comment and rate it. (oh... It should be more flowy I know. The flow of some parts are a bit...uh...mechanical... and I used a lotta jump pads, but I couldn't figure a better way out sometimes) one more thing: I can't let go the loops... it's stronger than me...=) |
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2008-08-10
one-ways
originally they weren't there, but I put them to those turrets... actually I've done wrong...
the drones... uh... I didn't wanted to provoke lag... but I think one or two drones doesn't lag that much xD
OH the gold? I put them just for...uh...nothing...as they don't actually do something (I guess I must worry with the esthetics then...)
A lot of thank you's to you all....
:)
the drones... uh... I didn't wanted to provoke lag... but I think one or two drones doesn't lag that much xD
OH the gold? I put them just for...uh...nothing...as they don't actually do something (I guess I must worry with the esthetics then...)
A lot of thank you's to you all....
:)
2008-08-09
Practice makes perfect
or excellence, at least. Keep going!
2 - i actually enjoyed this, but there are a few things that could be worked on.
Gold - stick to one patern, and spread it evenly around the map. I'd recommend 7 clumps of gold.
Enemies - some people like close calls, but i think you should focus a little more on the atmosphere given by them. Maybe try drone timing and chainguns? Mix it up a little, you know?
flow - i find it easiest to make flow, if instead of running on top of E blocks, you make the flat parts '5' blocks, so you can use a 7 then a 1 for a jump. Or jump up to another flat with no slope at all, i think you just have more options.
One-ways - try not to use any flat horizontal ones directly next to a drop, you sometimes land on them through a wall :P
I look forward to playing your next race :D
2 - i actually enjoyed this, but there are a few things that could be worked on.
Gold - stick to one patern, and spread it evenly around the map. I'd recommend 7 clumps of gold.
Enemies - some people like close calls, but i think you should focus a little more on the atmosphere given by them. Maybe try drone timing and chainguns? Mix it up a little, you know?
flow - i find it easiest to make flow, if instead of running on top of E blocks, you make the flat parts '5' blocks, so you can use a 7 then a 1 for a jump. Or jump up to another flat with no slope at all, i think you just have more options.
One-ways - try not to use any flat horizontal ones directly next to a drop, you sometimes land on them through a wall :P
I look forward to playing your next race :D
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2008-08-09
alright
here's a preliminary, with no enemies, and no aesthetic tileset modifications. i've retained the original path, but made it more flowy. i'll critique it a lot more tomorrow.
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2008-08-09
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your comment-area? (modified level-data)
2008-08-08
Flow was very iffy.
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2008-08-08
uh...
...it may sound strange... but me neither, I only put them so that those two turrets actually do something (yes yes I could take them off, but then there was an empty space xD
2008-08-08
3/5
Pretty good. Just needs more polishing. Didnt like the one-ways that much. Keep it up.
yungerkid
sorry