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| Author | Grapefruit |
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| Tags | author:grapefruit playable rated thwumplicious |
| Created | 2008-10-11 |
| Last Modified | 2008-10-11 |
| Rating |
4 by 24 people.
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| Description | my first map, enjoy |
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2008-11-04
hey,
this is great. especially for a first. 5aved.
2008-10-13
Great for a first map.
You have great map-making potential - I hope to see more from you (yes, I'm about to play your second, too).
Some more difficulty and more innovation would be nice.
Keep up the good work! 4/5.
Some more difficulty and more innovation would be nice.
Keep up the good work! 4/5.
2008-10-12
Yah
That is a good idea, just someone has already done it. Im not saying that you shouldnt do it, just letting you know. Good luck with your map. :D
2008-10-12
How to make teleporters
Okay Im really bad at explaining things so bear with me.
First you place a bouncepad where you want the teleport to start. Make sure it is the last object you have placed then go into the "level code." In the level code change the very last number (the -1) into -2, -3 or however fast you want him to move.
Then place another bouncepad above the other one where you want the ninja stop. You will have to do a lot of code editing to get it to work right. Well, that is how you make a VERTICAL teleport. I dont know how to make any other ones. ^^
If you need any more help or if I just suck at explaining then I can search for a tutorial on the forums. Hope I helped. :D
First you place a bouncepad where you want the teleport to start. Make sure it is the last object you have placed then go into the "level code." In the level code change the very last number (the -1) into -2, -3 or however fast you want him to move.
Then place another bouncepad above the other one where you want the ninja stop. You will have to do a lot of code editing to get it to work right. Well, that is how you make a VERTICAL teleport. I dont know how to make any other ones. ^^
If you need any more help or if I just suck at explaining then I can search for a tutorial on the forums. Hope I helped. :D
2008-10-12
@rule
So just because its this persons first map and they have potential Im supposed to give them 1 or 2 more points then the maps deserves? I dont think so. And stop telling people what to rate and stop saying to ignore peoples critique and comments.
Sorry grapefruit. You do have potential and such I just didnt think this map deserved a 5. Welcome to NUMA. I expect good things from you. :D
Sorry grapefruit. You do have potential and such I just didnt think this map deserved a 5. Welcome to NUMA. I expect good things from you. :D
2008-10-11
Simplistic
Yet challenging.
Quite fun!
Quite fun!
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2008-10-11
this is real good!
doctor feelgood! sorry. 4/5
2008-10-11
agreeing with spudz
frankly it sucked, first map or not.. but you'll learn and get better, good luck in the map making world
2008-10-11
Agree
with spuz and even though this is his first map, I'll give it a 3.
Nothing great.
And rule, do not complain about my decision.
=P
Nothing great.
And rule, do not complain about my decision.
=P
2008-10-11
Kinda reminds me of this map
Ironically, its his first and it already has more publicity ^^
http://nmaps.net/139615
http://nmaps.net/139615
2008-10-11
good for a first
the gold placement and tiles could be better.
4/5
It's Thwumplicious!!!
4/5
It's Thwumplicious!!!
2008-10-11
Yes well
I could cheat through the door if i got the thwump squeeze correct.
Anyway, I'm being nice, I'm not rating
Anyway, I'm being nice, I'm not rating
2008-10-11
Nice... ..lol..
I like the game play alot though it wasn't that challenging..
gold was sloppy...
and the tileset was ugly..
but since its your first... 4/5
anyway howcome your first map gets rated and mine doesn't......
:(
gold was sloppy...
and the tileset was ugly..
but since its your first... 4/5
anyway howcome your first map gets rated and mine doesn't......
:(
2008-10-11
Come on Evil_Sire it is his first map.
Ignore him for now, this is an awesome first map!
If you need ratings, just comment on my maps, I'm expecting great stuff from you.
If you need ratings, just comment on my maps, I'm expecting great stuff from you.
2008-10-11
I didn't
Like it.
I was bored very soon and the tileset and gold really put me off.
NR because I would rate it 2 :/
I was bored very soon and the tileset and gold really put me off.
NR because I would rate it 2 :/
2008-10-11
Pretty good
3
2008-10-11
excellent first
Love the exit switch placement, I might use that tile/bouncblock configuration in one of my future maps.
2008-10-11
Spud, this is his first map!
Most of the first map are just a lot of spamming.
I think this is a very cool level. And it is your first!
4
AGD;
I think this is a very cool level. And it is your first!
4
AGD;
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2008-10-11
This is not a five map.
You have potential, but first work more on your tilesets and add more variety to your gameplay. 3
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2008-10-11
3
The thwumps were okay but none of the little challenges were that hard, at all.
2008-10-11
Dude...
4.5/5 it would be 5 but the gold was a little misplaced. I'll rate it 5 so everyone can see that you have potential :D I will do my best to follow you through your map making journey
2008-10-11
this is good
even if it wasnt a first map! 4
teraza
brilliant