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Author	holmboy
Tags	author:holmboy flow fun medium playable race unrated
Created	2009-04-13
Last Modified	2009-04-13
Rating	2 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	My second race. I think it's far better than my first. It's not too hard, and around medium length. Some parts have a bit more flow than others, but overall I really like it, and I hope you will too. Constructive criticism is appreciated.

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flagmyidol

2009-04-14

The ending sucked.

Better to shorten a race then to end it badly. The flow was decent, now you just need to get a little bit more going on during it.

boonie92

2009-04-13

the flow was fairly good in places, then in others (particularly the tunnel areas was sorta horrible.) try and make the path to flow smoothly without any jerks. the gold and weapon placement was also ugly. try and make gold in clusters where its rewarding, yet not too hard to get. otherwise pretty nice. 3/5

rhezz

2009-04-13

Faster Cheat

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GNOTHERGNU

2009-04-13

not bad

flow was pretty good but not very smooth in places. try putting in more enemies next time to provide more of a challenge. the gold was a bit messy, putting it in clumps in important places makes it look more thought out and less spammed. the end was a bit pointless, i am not a big fan of tunnelly bits.

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protectedlord

2009-04-13

Cheatable.

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holmboy

2009-04-13

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Here's a demo for everyone.

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Whirlwind

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Comments

The ending sucked.

improved from your last....

Faster Cheat

not bad

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