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Ammunition

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Author KlanKaos
Tags agd author:klankaos palemoonisasexgod race tagscanbequitefunwhenusedinventively unrated
Created 2009-05-05
Last Modified 2009-05-05
Rating 2 more votes required for a rating.
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Description Probably my best race. I know that's not saying much, but I really like this one. I'm quite proud of it. Anyways, ECR.

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KlanKaos
2009-05-06

Playing this again...

I see what you guys mean about the flow. It's unspectacular, I agree entirely.

GNOTHERGNU
2009-05-05

i think N is a bit like art

if you want to do modern stuff you probably have to prove you can do it the traditional way so people see that you're "good enough". then when you make a "rickety" race people will call you innovative and original etc. maybe have a go at a slightly more generic race or two, just to get used to making smooth flow, then carry on doing new stuff.

i do like this, but some bits seem a bit pointlessly jerky rather than abstract, if you know what i mean.

gloomp
2009-05-05

He /so/ is.

:D

flagmyidol
2009-05-05

at least you're branching out a little

unlike some guys i could but won't mention. still, your race pretty much has to be perfect if it's gonna be that conceptish and "rickety". NR again

anthony_s
2009-05-05

Yeah the mine jumps were nice, needs work though. 3
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_destiny^-
2009-05-05

AGD-1

You need to make your flow smoother. I'm not saying you cant make a good race with rickety flow, but the bits of flow do need to have smooth transitions. Flow should never make you stop. So dont use jumps where you hit a wall then have to jump upwards afterwards, like in the final rocket section.

I can see you're improving
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wulfgang
2009-05-05

Meh

This is pretty bad, I played it for a good while trying to find some decent flow and this is all I managed.
It's like you deliberately constructed it poorly to try and mask the fact that it's entirely generic in design.

The jumps travelling through the mine tunnels were nicely executed and satisfying, but the rest was bland and badly put together.
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