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Author	andreas_xx
Tags	author:andreas_xx chaingun flow playable race rated rocket
Created	2009-10-01
Last Modified	2009-10-01
Rating	4 by 7 people.
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Description	I don't have anything to say. just try it rate and comment ;D Big thanks to _destiny^- and chironex for all the advices.

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Comments

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ultimatereading

2009-10-18

this map

was pretty good great use of chaingunner again great tiles. You should try an n-art

yungerkid

2009-10-03

you have some somewhat unique flow sections in here that i did not expect. next time, try to create some new flow sections of your own, that you have never seen before. also, try to incorporate a theme and an atmosphere.

rit0987

2009-10-02

double post... darn

rit0987

2009-10-02

Similar begginings! [nmaps.net] ... just kidding :P, you're getting better .. Agree with mattymc13 3/5

rit0987

2009-10-02

Similar begginings! [nmaps.net] ... just kidding :P, you're getting better .. Agree with mattymc13 3/5

boonie92

2009-10-01

better

the flow in this was deffinately more creative and complex.
ofcourse there were sections that didn't really feel smooth, but you will pick up what tile combos work and don't as you progress.

and as matty said, the asthetics need to be worked on, but that may take a while...(ive been on here for ages and im still pretty hopeless at making races look good.)

3/5

suparki12

2009-10-01

this is my first try...l

and i finished it, but still keep the good work up because not many people are as good.
4/5

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etdeshon

2009-10-01

you are improving

i can see better things here. like the flow in general can be smoothed out. the aesthetics can use a fine tune. also, im not sure how you make your races, but for now, i recommend you work on flow, then do the aesthetics. if you need any help just hit me up! either on the forums or on one of my maps. =)

cant wait for another one. 3.5^/5

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ZTHING

2009-10-01

slightly faster

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ZTHING

2009-10-01

Cheated

Nice race map, your getting good at this.

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andreas_xx

2009-10-01

upps...

i mean espada ;P

andreas_xx

2009-10-01

Thanks edpada ;D

espada777777

2009-10-01

5 D

andreas_xx

2009-10-01

yea i know. but i'm still "new" here on numa ;P and of curse I'll work on it.

chironex

2009-10-01

A decent race; I would estimate it's around a 3.5/5. But MattyMs13 is right; you need to work on your aesthetics and style.

MattyMc13

2009-10-01

you are improving

I find the aesthetics in this race to be typical to those new to races, and in my opinion, it's quite ugly. Try playing around with the tiles after you have completed the main flow, and I'm sure that you will eventually get it.