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00-0 Closure Dream

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Author Creature
Tags 00-0 action author:creature medium playable rated
Created 2010-01-03
Last Modified 2010-01-03
Rating
4
by 16 people.
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Description First map, please give me good comments peeps.

Have you ever seen something as
opulent as this? Or is it somewhat -
perplexing? Awe-striking?

The eye sees what the man thinks,
The man thinks what he knows,
But dreams of his wants.

His closure dream.

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If you love DDAs, you should check out the ones I made:

My DDAs [nmaps.net]

AGD

Overall, I enjoyed a lot of your maps. I hope to see more in the future.
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Welcome

This is a very great map and welcome to NUMA

asami XD

rofl XD

Heya new mapper! =3

I think the simplicity of this first map is great!
Next time, don't make it too empty.
I think I'm gonna stalk follow you for a while.

4/5

Not the fastets

But a crazy close call with the rocket o_O
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not bad.

In fact quite good.

I agree with AMLT though. :/

Speedrun.

I don't get why people rate maps up if they're the author's first...
This map is pretty average, but I'll round it up to a 3.
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Very good

for a first map
5.

welcome!!!

this is insane for a first map... is this your first map ever, or have you made other maps without submitting them?

Anyway, welcome to numa and have a 5/5
but you only have one map.. xD

so.. let's make here some :D

:]

Hi

Co-beginner-mapper, nice map, 4/5 it's a bit empty, but for the rest it is a really good map.

Welcome to NUMA

While this map is good for a first, calling it flawless is going a bit far imo. It's good to see that you've avoided the usual newcomer problems of object spamming and bad object placement, however I felt that the map was rather bland. The empty spaces in this map don't work in its favour, I fell; perhaps you could have continued the tile theme on the left-hand side? The gameplay wasn't too bad, and you've made good use of enemies. I think exiting the bottom section to the left could have been handled better, perhaps using a bounceblock to aid the flow there.
Aesthetically, this map wasn't dire but it wasn't very inspiring, either. Good tiles can enhance a map's atmosphere no end, but this comes with time and practice, so I wouldn't have expected this from a first map.
All in all, it's a promising start; good job!
Here's and AGD:
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Huh.

Weird. There's supposed to be Radium here accusing of you being a multiaccounter. Nice first map, by the way. And welcome! :D

Welcome to NUMA

I see you have already met two high class mappers haha but this is definately a high classed map gold and mines were good there was no spamming and tiles were relaxing 5aved

I think

that you should make another map soon or summit cause I must play more!!!! haha just shows how bored I am right now my mum asked me to tidy my room so sad so long

Ah there it is.

Thanks very much ultimatereading. Time to check out your maps.

Wait.

If two people 5aved it, shouldn't it be 5 by 2 people and not 1?

ah

where are my manors WELCOME TO NUMA!!! if you ever want any advice on anything just ask ;)

agree

totally with BML 5aved

Thnak you dude..

for all the comments ;D

Welcome to NUMA

flawless first map!!
5aved ;D
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