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retarded dream

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Author 12D3
Tags author:12d3 playable race unrated
Created 2005-10-23
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Description very first map i made

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not bad

for a first map, but kingalex has good advice, which you should take, i'll give u a 3. plz rate me back. thx

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Don't take any of this badly, I'm just trying to help.

1. Don't cluster objects needlessly, like all those floorguards, and the large gold heart.

2. Try to make maps with some sort of flow, that are a bit less random.

3. People like maps that are good to look at. The heart might look good in the thumbnail, but in-game it doesn't look fantastic.

Please take this criticism in the best way possible :)