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Round and round

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Author I_am_unknown
Tags author:i_am_unknown playable unrated
Created 2009-05-30
Last Modified 2009-05-30
Rating 3 more votes required for a rating.
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infernoXV8
2009-06-03

I loved it

5/5 for me, i love those kinda maps and its alot better then most maps u have made, its a shame i got so close to finishing the demo when i died, very good challenge, however i think the placement of the lazer drones could of been better, the normal drones however was spot on :)
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EdoI
2009-05-30

New map, I see...

A good thing is that you're obviously finished with clustering and other mistakes you made earlier. Now, you need to take more care about the map's aesthetics. There are many users who gives a lot of importance to the map's look. That's what brainstone was talking about - your map needs to look interesting to make people look at it. Second problem is repetitiveness. You've put almost the same thing four times on the map. That's not good.

Don't make maps when ever the idea comes to you. Look at some of the other members; I've made much less maps than you did, even though you came later than me. I admit, I've found my style just about five maps ago, but look how much more attention they get than yours!
Now wait. Wait for some /real/ inspiration. Don't make maps in less than twenty minutes. Don't submit them until /you/ think it's something, something special.
And once you submit it, note me, you see that I like to help. I'll give you some more advices and feedback, so you can get better. Good luck.

I_am_unknown
2009-05-30

Say

WHAT!!!!!?

brainstone
2009-05-30

I would suggest

to give your tilesets a more attention catching look, so that more people will look at.

Frekish
2009-05-30

for what?

I_am_unknown
2009-05-30

OK

Finished
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