Darker days
Author | Fenominous |
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Tags | author:fenominous f-art n-art unrated |
Created | 2008-05-24 |
Last Modified | 2008-05-24 |
Rating | 2 more votes required for a rating. |
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Description | Im not completely happy with it but hey , its my first ^^.
Well here it is , as i promised. http://numa.notdot.net/map/124945 Any N-arters have some tips for me? |
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2008-06-25
good, but...
a bit too basic. i'm not saying that a tree as a subject is a bad thing, but it is best to have a subject with a lot of life in it. for a tree's case, this would probably mean a detailed tree with some overhanging branches (a willow or something) or a majestic oak or something. life does not necessarily mean action (as in a lot going on); nor does it mean detail, though both are good to have. life means a subject that portrays an atmosphere somehow. like you might portray an atmosphere of peace and tranquility through how your subject is portrayed, and through the angle at which the picture is made. currently, this tree doesn't really portray that atmosphere, that feeling that emanates from the subject of a truly good n-art. take afternoon dragon. that dragon demonstrates just through its pose and through the way it stands on the rock, above everything else, that it is supreme, a beauty of nature. try to create a mood for the setting of an n-art, and stick with it.
i'm rambling on. i'll shuddup.
i'm rambling on. i'll shuddup.
2008-05-25
OK
Not Brill but ok to say the least
3/5
3/5
2008-05-24
*distinct
2008-05-24
Tip, make the guasses more distict
that is to make the shading look almost too shapded in full view. That way it doesn;t look fuzzy in the thumbnail.
bente
ahem...