Comments on "Soulgaze"
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2009-10-28
4.5/5
Comparatively good reveiw actually and I don't really see why there's such a big bother about one misplaced comma.
Good map too.
Good map too.
2009-10-28
I agree with spudzalot;
which means that I don't want anyone to complain about my review tomorrow. Even if it's terrible.
2009-10-28
the map explains the value of the map
2009-10-28
i agree with blackson
it irritates me that you have to apply to become a reviewer (with critiques that are expected to pertain to the map), but mintnut can get away with posting some random poetic nonsense that has no business trying to explain the value of a map.
poetic license is one thing, but whats the point of having reviews if a reader is forced to decode them.
AAJKS:FkiΩd/san?;fjiP;sjias?Jﮒ! is legit. seriously.
poetic license is one thing, but whats the point of having reviews if a reader is forced to decode them.
AAJKS:FkiΩd/san?;fjiP;sjias?Jﮒ! is legit. seriously.
2009-10-28
Once again atob wins the argument
-_-
2009-10-28
I remember this map.
I guess I found it scrolling through seven_two's maps.
2009-10-28
The comma
is /completely/ incorrect and makes no sense at all.
Flag is just championing this cause he wants minty's nuts :)
Flag is just championing this cause he wants minty's nuts :)
Absolutely nothing wrong with that comma. Even if it's grammatically incorrect, which I could debate, there's such a thing as poetic license. The comma works beautifully within the meter. And, yes, hero can be a gender-neutral term.
I'll play the map when I next have N; my only problem with the aesthetics is the floating bounce pads, but I have a feeling (without playing, yet) that they work quite well within the map.
Final thought about the metaphorical nature of the review: good job, mintnut. You're raising the standard for the rest of us.
I'll play the map when I next have N; my only problem with the aesthetics is the floating bounce pads, but I have a feeling (without playing, yet) that they work quite well within the map.
Final thought about the metaphorical nature of the review: good job, mintnut. You're raising the standard for the rest of us.
2009-10-28
Just for the record,
I did proof read, and noticed both of the many errors you picked out and consciously chose to leave them as they were...
Back to the map, it's one of my current favourites. Not enough maps these days choose such an open ended structure; one which encourages thought and multiple plays.
Back to the map, it's one of my current favourites. Not enough maps these days choose such an open ended structure; one which encourages thought and multiple plays.
2009-10-28
I believe hero is equally correct
Especially if you take a more liberal view with regards to the whole actor/actress debate etc.. As for the comma, I may be incorrect, but I think it works in the same sense as an oxford comma, although, it wouldn't be the first misplaced comma in one of my reviews.
Either way. I like the review. I have my methods for coming up with my bullshit, and I like them.
Either way. I like the review. I have my methods for coming up with my bullshit, and I like them.
2009-10-28
Minty, you've lost it.
Seriously, that review was way off. Even if I caught the meaning of what you were trying to say, and even accepting it as a proper review and not just some mumbo-jumbo....
"Our heroine is walking through a field of long grass, hazy in the afternoon sun. A general sense of expectation is growing around her, metaphorical clouds gathering on the metaphorical horizon of a metaphorical goat. She takes from her rucksack (no comma) a sheet of paper, torn down one edge, and a box of matches. Lighting a match, it takes three trembling attempts to light the note.
Awakened by the sound, two dragonflies twist in the evening night. Chasing their prey, they twirl through the leaves above the thin band of smoke, rising from the temple of a now eternal gaze."
I am not going to judge the map by the review though, and 7_2 should appreciate that.
"Our heroine is walking through a field of long grass, hazy in the afternoon sun. A general sense of expectation is growing around her, metaphorical clouds gathering on the metaphorical horizon of a metaphorical goat. She takes from her rucksack (no comma) a sheet of paper, torn down one edge, and a box of matches. Lighting a match, it takes three trembling attempts to light the note.
Awakened by the sound, two dragonflies twist in the evening night. Chasing their prey, they twirl through the leaves above the thin band of smoke, rising from the temple of a now eternal gaze."
I am not going to judge the map by the review though, and 7_2 should appreciate that.
2009-10-28
I don't
understand the review's relevance to the map. It's well written, however.
2009-10-28
Faster AGD
Interesting indeed.
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2009-10-28
metaphorical goat?
map is fun to play around in.
2009-10-28
this map is actually
pretty inconspicuous
but
it was totaly fun
:]
but
it was totaly fun
:]
2009-10-28
Boeing AGD
The different paths are fun to explore, and the rockets work very well.
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2008-07-05
yes i check.
=D
2008-07-04
Question
On your last comment, you'd love to do what?^^
Other than that, very nice map, I like it:)
4/5 and favourited
Other than that, very nice map, I like it:)
4/5 and favourited
2008-06-21
Oh, you check?
Much appreciated <3
2008-06-15
The gauss was annoying.
But otherwise, this was a peach.
2008-06-15
why the guass?
totally not needed.
capnshazmo
EVERYONE'S WRONG
TWO WORDS