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Author	ybadragon
Tags	action author:ybadragon mines. unrated
Created	2009-03-14
Last Modified	2009-03-14
Rating	3 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	it's not complete yet but i don't know what else to put in it. any suggestions...by the way this is the first map i have ever created

Arcanas said:

"...Also, you had no gold. Gold is important. Try using it in these ways:
- show the path through the level
- make tons of it, and make it a challenge to get to..."

Don't just put gold in for the sake of it, making tons of gold often will look ugly and detract from the map.
A bit more tile variety would have made the map a bit more interesting, and it looked like you just gave up on the right half of the map.

Not a bad first try.
I'd rate this 4/10

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im_bad_at_N

2009-03-14

look at my 4 rooms maps

those are great ideas in those!!!!!!!!!!

nice 1st map and welcome to numa!

5/5 for ur first rating ever

Arxanas

2009-03-14

hmm...

it's not consistent. see the beginning part with the wall jumps to get out? on the right part, it's right in the middle of the mines, the other part, it's sorta in the way of the mines. Personally, I would change the style of the left tile

ppl don't like it when you hide thwumps like that. unless it's a DDA or something, I DON'T suggest you do it.

Also, you had no gold. Gold is important. Try using it in these ways:
- show the path through the level
- make tons of it, and make it a challenge to get to
- put it at regular intervals, for example, the steps on the right, if you put one on top of each step...
- use it to hide stuff, if you NEED to

But so far, you're doing well for a first map, and welcome to NUMA.

4 room mines

Comments

slow demo

look at my 4 rooms maps

hmm...