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Baby Bottle

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Author mystro23
Tags 23 action author:mystro23 mystro rated
Created 2011-03-16
Last Modified 2011-03-16
Rating
4
by 9 people.
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Description Enjoy
Edited

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LUKESV
2011-04-04

http://pastebin.com/Fz9W6kCz

astheoceansblue
2011-03-20

Here you go

http://pastebin.com/W741vznm [pastebin.com]

The only review that had problems was the first. Compare mine to yours to see the edits I've made.

I changed the word disgusting as it was a little aggressive, shuffled a few things about, and removed a redundant phrase.

The best advice I can give to writing is this:

Consider the use of syllables; writing is like music, it needs to flow in a thoughtful way.
Try not to explain the same thing twice.
Try not to use the same words too close together as this lends your piece a repetitive feel.
Try not to slip in clever words for the sake of it; always consider the best word for the job.

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If you have any questions about anything let me know.

Life247
2011-03-19

AGD.

Fun, but not enjoyable. 3.
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lsudny
2011-03-16

I also wanted to say

that the aesthetics here are masterful.

lsudny
2011-03-16

Pretty intense.

I like.

EddyMataGallos
2011-03-16

improved speed again

407 frames
NREality
NOt on the mood of improed it anymore, so anybody could try it, its not that difficult
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EddyMataGallos
2011-03-16

improved speed

412 frames
NREality
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EddyMataGallos
2011-03-16

Fastest speed

426 frames
NReality
Someone go for sub-400?
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Sunset
2011-03-16

Wicked cool.


Jeremoon
2011-03-16

I like the tiles and a godd gameplay

LUKESV
2011-03-16

Cool.

Will send you a start later.

Fraxtil
2011-03-16

Unintended AGD route. Oh well.

3.5^/5
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Fraxtil
2011-03-16

Quick demo.
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mystro23
2011-03-16

intended all gold route.
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Mr_Mongoose
2011-03-16

Yes

this is really sick. You maybe could have kept the guass in at the top in a place where it couldn't see you in the lower half, but this is like the perfect level of challenging for me. Jumping around the top was especially fun - and the bit where I slid down the thwump.
4aved
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mystro23
2011-03-16

fixed let me know what you think...

Mr_Mongoose
2011-03-16

Sweet tiles btw

the guass is definitely frustrating

Mr_Mongoose
2011-03-16

The guass/rocket combo

seems to oscillate between appropriately and unnecessarily intense
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