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Author	wilby
Tags	action author:wilby playable unrated
Created	2007-03-06
Rating	3 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	...and failed, miserably. My first real map, apparantly my first two were too crap to be considered. Please, i beg you, dont ignore me. Tell me this map is a piece of crap and tell me why. I need advice. Thanks.

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wilby

2007-03-06

Thanks

for all the comments. More maps are coming. And yeah, i didn't say it was my first map. Of the other 2 the one i made with no help was symetrical and really gimicky.

nFamous

2007-03-06

And...

could anyone rate my map before it gets completely unnoticed ?!
The only vote there is a 2.5 without a comment oO

http://numa.notdot.net/map/81366

...pls :)

Zanderzainal

2007-03-06

Other than that

I reckon its damn good for a first one... It's pretty fun too...

Zanderzainal

2007-03-06

Your tileset and your items appear to be sort of disjointed... Try and make them all of one style, and make them flow together more if you get my meaning. Sometimes really good mapmakers can make disjointed maps and pull them off but its damn hard i think... Think about aesthetics..

IndianSummer

2007-03-06

Oh, first "real" map it is :P

Just to correct my post xD

IndianSummer

2007-03-06

"This map is a piece of crap"

I like it oO
No, really, for your first submitted map it's quite good :
1. : No hidden objects
2. : Clear tileset, non randomly
3. : Almost no clustering xD

What to make better :

1. : It's really somehow difficult, don't really know why, but even after 10 tries I couldn't make it oO

Uhm...what else...nice concept already :P
The map is maybe bit too long in my opinion (IMO)
I'll tell if I can find more things to improve, my brain feels dead at the moment (ATM)

PS : Just so you know what atm and imo are xD
PS2: My demo has one action-man-like looking part oO

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