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Watermelon Juice

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Author Loquacious369
Tags author:loquacious369 flowy fun playable race rated
Created 2009-04-25
Last Modified 2009-04-25
Rating
3
by 19 people.
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Description Probably my simplest and shortest race maps i've made... Didn't take as long to make it unlike the other ones... Have fun and plz rate!!!

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Simply 4 Rooms Stressful? Lemon Juice Melon Juice Apple Juice

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and im serious, i got straight A's, im not trying to be a good map maker,,, i just got a comment asking me to make something more simlistic... and just to let u know,,, im taking algebra 2,, so i dont know if ur taking a higher level class or not... and also, i type like this cause thats the way everybody types now a days...

lol

i think we got ur point on the other map,,, i made most of my maps at school during like 15min breaks... anyways, i dont play n-game anymore
Then do enlighten me, why can't you type properly. You are very eloquent indeed. And I'm curious to see how a 14 year old is a straight A GCSE level student. Fuck, I'm one of the most highly educated students in my year (I have a private tutor) and yet I'm GCSE level B+. Yes I am doing my GCSEs in year nine.

If you're so bright, clearly you would be able to see the problems in the map. So don't lie.

What wicked webs we weave when we practise to deceive.

PS: If you at any time doubt what I've said, I can prove it. So just try me mate.

Also, I'm not trying to offend you here. I'm just pointing it out. Your posts look like the work of an eleven year old crouching over MSN.

Oi whiner!

I'm 14, and if I do say so myself, my maps are a lot better than this... thing. Klanny boy nailed it, you spend time polishing your map then it will be good. But if you just make it, play it, and submit it, it will suck. This is wank. It's loopy, boring, pain-stakingly easy, hideous, generic, lack of variety, mines on rockets, crappy start, poor gold placement, cheatable...

Do I need say anymore?

k

I gotcha point...

Heh.

I'm sorry if I come across as harsh, but it's true. If you don't have as much time to spend on your maps as other people, try submitting one every two weeks or so, instead of daily like PALEMOON does, that bastard.

And being a 14 year old straight A student does not automatically mean you make good maps. I'm 16 and I get straight As - yet my first maps were crap too. It happens to 95% of us, though some are just straight awesome from the start. But that's beside the point. Just take a little more time, and you'll get better.

KlanKaos

too harsh man... calm down... you are in a deep trance... and you are sleepy...
JK
lolz...

well

im a 14 yr old... i also have school and im a straight a student... highly gifted magnet
You have as much time to spend on your maps as PALEMOON does, I'm sure. I'm not trying to be harsh, here, I'm just saying you should spend a lot of time making sure your levels are enjoyable. Anyone can do it. You don't have to be pro.

Dude

Dude. I just started ngame. Im not "pro" like destiny, palemoon, karma, etc. I just started, ok? Lay off a bit...just a bit k?
Don't submit as many. Spend the time you have to make maps making a few good ones, not spitting out several crappy ones. It's one of the most valuable lessons in mapping - spend time on your maps.

well srry...

i made this in a short time... i didnt have much time on my pc so... yeah and anyways, i havent had my account for long... only like 2 weeks i think

Not good.

It's so boring. There's no excitement to this at all. Races are all about excitement. This is just running a marathon of loops.

Very Simple

your maps are

progressively getting better and better. Thanks for taking my suggestions. I really like the X in the middle.
4/5(just cause it was a tad short, but I still really liked it)

like this 4aved

PRETTY FUN

sweet, first try

very nice...
Demo Data

The

Simplicity make it fun.

awesome

very cool and yes it is simpler than ur other levels!