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Author	Sapdaddy
Tags	action author:sapdaddy medium playable puzzle rated
Created	2010-04-17
Last Modified	2010-04-17
Rating	3 by 5 people.
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Description	First attempt at an N ninja map, tell me what you think. :)

Comments

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lsudny

2010-04-17

Welcome to NUMA!

Nice first map. Firetamer said what you need to improve though.

Sapdaddy

2010-04-17

Hey thanks a ton for the comments, guys. Especially concerning the clutters of mines, I probably should have though that through better.

In response to Erikcu: I have only been playing for a little while, thought I'd try making my own for a change.

Thanks again for the comments guys, I hope to be making more in the future!

furry_ant

2010-04-17

Welcome to NUMA.

Pretty good for a first map. Firetamer pretty much said it all though. The clusters of mines aren't good in a map. Try to make your gold patterns more consistent, and your tiles to have more subtance and shape to them.

Anyway, enjoy your stay!

erikcu

2010-04-17

That is hard.

not the puzzle-aspect, just the execution.

Agreed, that is a real good first map...
It is always hard to tell if it is just an old player on a new account though.

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firetamer2

2010-04-17

You can make it much better though

The mines shouldn't be so close together in the first part. And the downfacing one-ways are very cheatable. I hate it wen there are mines in the middle of bounceblocks (most other user do too), and the extra 2 rockets seem redundant. The workings of the level seem fine, with the trapdoors. The tileset isn't that interesting. The mines in that small room that are in a big chunk, just never do that. If the ninja can't ever touch it, don't add it.

Invalid

2010-04-17

What sunset said

it's so true

ZTHING

2010-04-17

Welcome to NUMA

Sunset

2010-04-17

wow.

best first i've seen in a while.