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interesting

ill think about it... thanks!

of course!

I am still interested, I just forgot to work on the maps lol. You can do the next couple if you want, in the meantime i'll pick and choose a few that i think I can edit.

And about zoas, you have quite some work! When I am bored I sometimes go through your work, and it is like a story! There are definitely some feature worthy maps, I just want to take my time and explore a bit more. If you want, I will tell you which are my favorites when I am done exploring ;)

thanks!

I love the changes man! I will do the next couple, I am starting to understand what you mean ;)

yeah go ahead

you can do the next couple. Thanks for the help

lol sorry

here they are:

http://paste.droni.es/6918c72c8517c92f46fd3921

and

http://paste.droni.es/83f97f86d996e53a8b667f84

if you want demos tell me, they can clear up things. Also remember, the first one is not meant to be a parkour map, it is meant to be a puzzle.

Hmmm

i read it again. Do you mean that you want our relationship to expand beyond just Parkour and Puzzle Laboratories? Of course, i love rceing your the23 maps and im sad that you havent done vodka ones recently. If you ever want a collab or something just tell me... also i am waiting to see how the 2 pandp edited maps look to you, but please finish my bday map, I cant wait!

oh

i cant wait! And I am sorry bro but I am not completely sure what you are saying... if you want to be anonymous in P&P i will leave out that you helped or i will say help from anonymous. If you want me to say you helped then of course, i will put your name in the logo. Are you saying your numa relationship is stronger when you are quiet?

What i was saying was what your comments are on the 2 maps that i just edited, the ones that we are working on.

so...

comments on the two i changed?

lol man

so sorry, I understand how annoying that must be. I totally forgot, sorry i will try to remember this time XD

Wait...

I get it. WOW LOL! sorry about comment below I just dont want people to take that the wrong way and not like me. I know you are joking tho :D

Also,

please stop saying bad things about me advertising. I know you are joking, but can you stop? I didnt even tell trav to post that map, i actually wanted it to be secret, for the collab. I am sorry about the dronies thing, since you are upset about that i see. I DID put you in favorite authors tho on my profile page

Dude

I swear i am not elhombre. I dont get why he made that ded to me, i think its cuz i told him who he was. All i remember is saying "tu es traveleravi, no?" which im pretty sure means you are traveleravi because i thought it was him. Please believe me. Everyone thinks he is me now.

???

How do u even know who i picked? Anyway, lsudny is TOP QUALITY!!!!!! Then mrgy makes the most unique maps i have ever seen. I was torn about putting you or StreetsAhead as number three... Then i was like "well, what genre do i like better? normal action or awesome races?" and i ended up deciding races. And streetsahead is the best race maker ever. So sorry, but they limited me to only 3 authors. Believe me it was tough :( o and i was too lazy to figure out and fill in any of that best mappack stuff, and no one should care about best review best post quote political stance garbage blablabla stuff. I just stuck mainly with the map stuff and best author/player. But believe me if I had more top author slots, you would definitely be in them. You are probably 4th, with VODKALOVER 5th or 6th. Sorry man, you know i respect you ;) best of luck! and if you ever decide to join the mass collab, there are 2 spots left ;D
Continuing,

I dont really understand why you only agded one map. No offense, but i think you can agd plenty more :D if you want a few demos, ill send you some and you will see how some agds are WAAAY easier than you think, especially in the beginning of the pack.

If you still think the maps are hard, after these words, than can you tell me how to make them more enticing and easier? My goal like i said above is to make an awesome unique pack, that is not neccesarily simple, that people will remember. Please take the time to play EVERY map at least once, and then you can pm your long response to me on the forums. I would really love it if for each map you gave one sentence on how you felt about it.

Whew, that was long. I didnt proofread this, tell me if something doesnt make sense ;) Thanks for the help, i appreciate it :D
I have been unavailable for a day or two.

For your extended response, take as long as you want! What would really make my day is if you did a quick sentence for every map, what i need to improve etc. Also, can you tell me your top 3 favorite maps and why? and your least favorite 3? it will give me a good idea what your vision is.

Concise,Clean,Fluid:I looked at a couple of those mappacks. (2-4 from your pack is boss, man!) They are very clean, i understand that, like not messy. I guess they are concise, because they have a theme. they are pretty fluid also. Here is how i feel: Those maps are great. But EVERYONE seems to like a mass amount of those simple, quick maps. Dont get me wrong, simple is better. But i want to provide a unique pack that people will say "Yeah! this pack is special to me!" I have yet to see a map focused on puzzles, and no one clearly says that they purposely involve parkour. I thought it would be a cool twist to make my pack not the usual, simple, small mappack that i might even say is repetitive. My goal is to make a entertaining map full of puzzles that will get people hooked and want to keep trying. The parkour is imo a nice addition to the puzzle factor, that gives you a break from thinking and lets you jump around. For example, the first map is supposed to teach you some basic parkour, just to give you a feel. The second map is meant to give you a simple idea of what an easy puzzle might look like. I think D1 and D2 are perfect exapmples of puzzles that are in the middle of the mappack. Those puzzles are meant to keep you hooked with a unique twist on one-ways, and feel a sense of pride when you beat it. Also, I think E1 is a good example of a parkour map. It is a medium minejumper that lets you take a break from thinking, and test your reflexes and parkour skills in a minefield. Some, like F3 and G3, are meant to be a little more fun than the rest, and kind of relaxing in a way. What i am trying to say is, i am trying to fit things together in a special way.

The comments are limited to 2500 characters. I will continue on next comment.
Rules:
1-Don't ask me to remove a featured map
2-Don't ask me to remove first or last map, they are part of the storyline. The storyline is that you go through ninja college, and graduate in the last map. The first map also teaches you parkour.
3-Remember!!! Parkour AND Puzzle!!! If you feel there is too much Parkour or too much Puzzle, tell me. Not every map has to have both of those, as long as it has at least one.
4-Have fun. Remember this is my first mappack. PLease give constructive critism.
5-Yes, i playtested also.
6-I understand your vision is for the maps to be simple and clean. I agree, except I like some challenging, large maps too. Like Parietal and Parietal:The sequel were two of my faves.

Have fun, friend. And thanks again :)
http://pastebin.com/E1gKbD8k

I am scared XD

But i trust in you to give helpful critism. And guess what?!? Streets contacted me! He is unable to submit a second featured map but i have his first!!! The mappack is complete! I will send the link in next comment for you to playtest.

Also, Those two messages i tried to hide in the words that i thought elhombre was trance. But i figured out it was not and i talked with him also XD Then I was almost certain it was Traveleravi, because he connects maps like that, but he had commented on elhombres map and didnt seem to like him. Oh well. I give up.

Nvr mind

its not trance (Hopefully you got those hints below!)now I think its traveleravi. He is the only one that really cares about connecting maps like that. And he has spoken spanish before.
Do you know streetsahead? He hasn't talked to me for a while even tho i need him for P&P

Sorry man!

I didn't realise it was annoying. Ill
Try to stick with this
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Same map.

To be honest, I am
Really excited
About the map pack.
Not to overbear you, but the playtesting will
Contain some rules about it.
Example: don't ask me to remove a featured map.
?

News:

I have put together basically everything for P&P Labs. I finished most of the features, and i think all the maps i amde are done. The semi-final thing is me and suds collab feature, and maybe trances. Also i am mainly waiting for streetsahead's two races, he hasnt responded for a while. You may even get it before sunday for playtesting!

The mappack has 1-2 maps i would remove. I wanna see if u feel the same way about them, or if 1 might like them and it is just my taste. This mappack should be a good 1 for my first. I made a semi storyline... the last, finale, map ties in with the first, entrance, map.

Thank you zoas!

You of course have every right not to vote. <3

Nice map

its cool. Its pretty quick and fun. The tile set is simple but artistic and the use of enemies is minimal but effective. 5/5

bean collected

YOU SO JELOUS I WON FIRST IN THIS COMPETITION!
OHHHH SNAPPP.
:P
5aved.
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AGD

Bean collected. Enjoyable map :D
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I don't really comment on anyone's maps at the moment - I'm busy studying and directing a play. Sorry that you feel left out.

haha, thanks!

thanks for the milestone :D now i have 1.8 rates per map xD
I might make a second one.

BCD

5/5 Nice map, liking this competition :)
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Anyway, hahaha, thank you very much.